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Fujiwe High Knights Final

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This is my very first try with Phostoshop and tablet graphic, as well as with digital art. I never really drew traditionally before, so I am requesting critics to see where are my mains lacks and where I should be improving what.

If you want to follow my process I did things this way :

Base here :

Then by order :

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I'm requesting critics on this one because I arrive to the ones where the elve's ears should show but I have no clues how to modify it the right way for them to really look good. So while I'm going to figure that out, I am willing to make this WIP better.



The ocs names are given in this dialog between the main protagonist, Princess Lirisya and a friend of hers from a neighboring countries, she show them the pictures of hers Knights who are presently on a mission :

- Julia, I got the photos; first is Reno Hijikata, the second born of his family.
- Whoa, he's hot...
- Then is Ryuji Hijikata; the third born.
- He looks so cool...
- Here is Shiro Hijikata, the fourth born.
- Oh my god, they're so much cooler than mines... He's hot.
- Yeah, but don't tell him or he might do something very stupid. Next is Aki Hijikata; the fifth born.
- I totally want to meet this one. I so love him...
- Yeah, all my guests says so, until he open his mouth to speak to them that is. The next one is the father, Sun Hijikata.
- Even the father is good looking.
- Thankfully, they didn't took after the mother... Then is Aoi Hijikata, the sixth born.
- Oh you even have a child among your knights, will you allow him to come and play over?
- He's a thousand years old already... but whatever... if you feel like it... After him is Yoru Minori.
- That one has so long hairs... He looks like quite the player type...
- Eh? Did you thought the others were decent in the area? Maybe you're too innocent to meet them in the end... Well following is Kira Meiji.
- So kind...
- Are you sure we're looking at the same guy? You really need to be checked you know? After him is Kaoru Hijikata, the first born of his family.
- This one is...
- No, trust me, you won't want to meet him. He's strict and bossy! After him is Neiji Maeda...
- He's so hot... but he looks kinda severe.
- At least you got one of them right... yeah, he barely opens his mouth, but when he do, you regret it almost immediately. Finally is Tsunami Nan.
- Was he depressed?
- No, just bored to death because he had to listen to the photographer...

In this world Elves are ascended humans who have been given by god magical powers and enhanced bodies, that comes with keener senses and thus their body modify to take on elvin features (long ears, smoother skin, and weightless bodies), as well as a Soul Weapon and a Soul Armor.

PS : When you will make your critic, I do not mind you being harsh, but keep in mind that I am totally new at drawing therefore I don't yet know the terms related to drawings, Thus, it would nice if you either provide an explanation or put it into simpler / more common terms.

I work with CS5 and a Bamboo pen graphic tablet.

Cheer~
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beyourselfbefree's avatar
They are cute :D
I like the one with long blue hair :)